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Nixon,American President, had signed the Shanghai bulletin in 1972 when he visited
mainland.This is the first and the important bulletin in the three ones that open
the reformative door of capitalism in People's Republic of China.

我建議這樣翻譯，詳見下文：

Nixon, President of the US, had signed the Shanghai Bulletin in 1972 when he visited
Mainland China. This is the first and the most important bulletin among the three ones
that open the gate of capitalistic reformation in People's Republic of China.

淺藍字為已更動的詞彙。